Question

Sentence Fluency PRACTICE

Re-write this paragraph, correcting for fluency, capitalization and correct word
usage.
In the movie life is beautiful the main character Guido has a type of
personality where even though things in his life aren't perfect, He knows
how to always keep a smile on his face and never shows anyone a sign
that anything is wrong mentally and emotionally with him. In my life i can
say me and him are sort of the same in front of people, they know me as
the fun, silly, goofy happy girl. Little do they know i have so much
emotional things going on behind closed doors, that you would never
think someone at this age would be going through.

Answer 1

In the movie, life is really beautiful.The main character was Guido,an optimistic person.He has a personality that always puts a smile on the face even things doesn't go well with his expectations.He is good at accepting things,like when there is negative thing happens, seems he is not even affected at all aspects but the truth is,he does.

Answer 2

Here it is:

In the movie, life is really beautiful.The main character was Guido,an optimistic person.He has a personality that always puts a smile on the face even things doesn't go well with his expectations.He is good at accepting things,like when there is negative thing happens, seems he is not even affected at all aspects but the truth is,he does.

Guido and me are somehow alike.In front of the people, being funny,silly,goofy and a happy girl they see,but deep inside I have a lot of battles that I just kept hidden.Somebody could not thought that,at this age,I already take some breakthroughs.