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Re-write the following extract as five sentences. What is the effect? He squinted through the gloom of the interior, which was quite deserted, with a single candle burning near the altar, thinking that it was sad to see an empty church on Christmas Eve, but, shrugging the thought away, he began a careful inspection of the places where the statue might have been concealed. (11)​

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What is the effect? He squinted through the gloom of the interior. It looked quite deserted with a single candle burning near the altar. He felt sad, watching how empty the church was on Christmas eve. Shrugging away his thoughts, he began a careful inspection of the places where the statue might have been concealed.

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