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Please help with the question in the image attached, thank you!

Please help with the question in the image attached, thank you!-example-1
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B because it is clearer and more concise

While the first email sounds more professional, it is more confusing than the second and is unnecessarily using words to understand the true meaning. Although the second email is not as professional, it can get the message across clearer.
Good luck!
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