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I would appretate it if somebody would correct theses sentences PLZ !

1. "The image that I get when I think of Jay is when I think of him as a small child, when he could rattle off the names of nearly every species of whale known to man. (Context: A grandfather describes his grandson.)"

2. Only then did I realize how annoyed a cat must have got when it couldn’t catch the mouse, and eventually how happy a cat can get when the mouse dies without it trying. (Context: A mouse dies from fright under a couch while a mom, her son, and their cat try to coax it to come out.) plz some body correct the 2 sentences PLZ and TY!

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2. only then did I realize how annoyed the cat cat must have got when it couldn't catch the mouse, and eventually how happy the cat can get when the mouse dies.

Step-by-step explanation:

1. "The image that I get when I think of my Jay is when I think of him as a child. when he could rattle the nearby whales names. He is well know to man."

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