Question

Which sentence demonstrates wordiness? A) I need to study for Friday's science test. B) At the present time, I have no available cash. C) Tomorrow we will make plans for our summer vacation. D) Yesterday I met with my best friend from elementary school.

Answer 1

The sentence that demonstrates wordiness would be B)

At the present time, I have no available cash.

Wordiness is when you use too many words or complicated words to make your point. At the present time is not needed for that sentence, It's too much.

Answer 2

B). At the present time, I have no available cash.

Step-by-step explanation:

A sentence is considered to be 'wordy' when it employs excessive words or uses more words than required to express a thought. 'Wordiness' reduces the impact or complicate the meaning of the message or thought that is being conveyed. Thus, the writers are required to use precise language to ensure the efficient delivery of their idea or thought to the audience.

In the given question, the sentence that demonstrates 'wordiness' would be 'At the present time, I have no available cash' as here the words 'at the present time' seems wordy that reduces the impact of the message. It could be replaced by the word 'now' to eliminate the error and offer a clear and concise thought. Thus, option B is the correct answer.