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Which is the best way to combine these two sentences?The Park District has won many awards. The Park District has several fine programs for young children.

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The award winning park district has several fine programs for young children
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The best way to combine these two sentences would be eliminating the subject, which is repeated in both parts, and joining them in a way that has a smooth flow.

The result would be:

The award winner "Park District" has several fine programs for young children.

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