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Which version best uses a variety of sentence structures to enhance the flow and writing style of a story?

A. as soon as the other actor came out of the audition room, I knew I would be next. I took a deep breath. Finally, the casting director called my name, and I stood up.
B. as soon as the other actor came out of the audition room, I knew I would be next. Before the casting director called my name and I stood up, I took a deep breath.
C. the other actor came out of the audition room. I knew I would be next. I took a deep breath. Finally, the casting director called my name. I stood up.
D. the other actor came out of the audition room, and I knew I would be next. I took a deep breath, and finally the casting director called my name, and i stood up

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Answer:

A . as soon as the other actor came out of the audition room, I knew I would be next. I took a deep breath. Finally, the casting director called my name, and I stood up.

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