Question

What is the best revison to make in sentence 3

Answer 1

hi,

Sentence 13 does not need to be revised.
The other sentences do not makesense. They are either fragments or run-ons. They can also use to many words such as which.
So, it does notneed to be corrected at all.
Hope this helps! :)

Answer 2

Howdy,
I do not think sentence 13 needs to be revised. This is because I don't think any other answer choices are correct either. So, the answer would be D.

Hope this helps!