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He found his neighbor who lived next door to be attractive in appearance

a. His neighbor who lived next door, he found attractive.
b. He found his neighbor attractive.
c. His next door neighbor was attractive to him.
d. none of these

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The simpler version of the given sentence is:

b. He found his neighbor attractive.

The given sentence is too wordy and some words can be eliminated without altering the meaning and thought of the sentence. The answer is an improved version of the given sentence because it is concise.

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