Need Asap !!! Can you please revise this for me and then do a reflection of it ??
Original-There are approximately`” 6.8 billion” cell phones in the world this man made technology was invented in 1973 who would've thought this man made technology would be a big deal to society and a horrible thing at the same time. The telephones have good effects and mostly bad effects. Would it be hard to survive without a cellphone in this society and generation well let's see.