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Read the following short paragraph:
I couldn't sleep. I went into the kitchen. There was nothing to eat. I decided to go for a walk. The streets were empty. It was kind of scary. The fresh air made me feel tired. I returned to my house. I slept like a baby.

This paragraph is full of short, choppy sentences. Use your knowledge of complex sentences and subordinate clauses to improve the paragraph. Include all of the details in your revised version.

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 At midnight I could not sleep I wen't into the kitchen I looked around, there was nothing good to eat. So I decided to go for a walk, the streets were empty, Not a single light was on, I was scared, the fresh air made me kinda sleepy, I walked back to my house, I passed out as soon as I got in bed
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