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I woke up to find a mysterious girl hovering over me. She put a note on my nightstand and then disappeared. Slowly, I leaned over to look at the note. Surprised, I saw...

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I woke up to find a mysterious girl hovering over me. She put a note on my nightstand and then disappeared. Slowly, I leaned over to look at the note. Surprised, I saw ( You should be more careful; in what appeared to be the worst handwriting I've ever witnessed. I turned around the room and saw a broken chair, two glasses filled with what I assume to be muddy water, and a book. Just a singular book laying down, the name on the top looked old, as if it had just been pulled from the back of a library. I stood up and went towards the book but the girl popped back in the room, running towards the book she grabbed it and clutched it before me, not letting me see or touch it. "What book is that?" I asked, but she simply nodded her head, refusing to tell me. I really wanted to know what book it was but I knew she was serious about not telling me so I let it go, I turned around and noticed a door, that had apparently been hidden in the shadow from where I had been laying on the bed. I went to open the door and she didn't stop me, just stared blankly at me. I opened it and in front of me was a broken down house, it was fairly large but I assume it was abandoned and the girl was just using it as a home. Although it was still weird where the water came from. If this is an abandoned home, had the water come from outside? I revolted at the idea of it being actual mud water, how long had she been drinking water like that. I turned behind me and the girl had walked to the door frame, appearing as though she stopped moving when I looked at her.

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Trigger warnings: screaming, death, ghost, darkness, etc.

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I woke up to find a mysterious girl hovering over me. She put a note on my nightstand and then disappeared. Slowly, I leaned over to look at the note. Surprised, I saw…

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I saw my dog, but the thing was that my dog was usually jumpy and hyper, but at this moment when i looked over i knew something was wrong. He was just staring strait ahead of him into the darker part of my room where the shadow of a pen would still look horrifying. I tiredly grabbed my glasses and put them on, i looked over and saw nothing but my dog was really focused on that side of my room. At this point he started barking(which he has NEVER done before)and ran in front of me, Almost like he was trying to protect me from….nothing(of at least I knew of at the time). I ran over to the light switch almost as quickly as if a pack of hungry bears were chasing me, i almost tripped over myself.this was when i remembered about the girl, terrified i switched on my light(probaly faster than the speed of light itself). I looked at my dog and inspected my room for the girl, i relized i was so caught up with my dog and the floating girl that i forgot she left a note. I picked it up ,shivering as if i was in negative degree snow without a jacket. I slowly turned the note over to which i found words, they were in cursive which i can read but i have to really look closely and spell it out. It read “tr-us-t th-e D-og”. This freaked me out, i looked over to him and was contemplating wether to snuggle with him knowing he was scared to or if i should run away thinking maybe he was haunted. i ended up holding him and we were scared for the next night. then the next morning he seemed normal and as time went on i ended up forgetting about the incident. then it had been 40 years ago, when i was 24. one night i saw the girl again...no note...she was just there.. and then...gone. moments after she dissapered i heard a lot of sounds. it was caotic and i had dementia so i didnt even remember anything from 40 years ago. but suddenly i saw my dog(who sadly passed on) but i didnt relize this was out of the normal. he did a bark - but a reassuring one, in some way it felt. i followed him trying to get him from what i thought was a earthquake. suddenly i heard sounds that sounded like a mix of yelling and something like a black portal sucking in everything. i chased the dog being a old man now and nt knowing where or what to do. i chased him into a basement i apperently had. i then heard a few sounds of banging, glass shattering, and a ghostly screams. suddenly everything came back to me. i remembered everything from my life in detail even more than a normal person, even the time i was born, all my pain went away . i walked out and everything was fine and outside was as suny as could be. i will never know what couldve happend that day but i know what did happen because i trusted the dog. After that my doctors said that i no longer had dementia and it was a miracle. i lived the rest of my life with the dog and we both happily passed on together when the time came.

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