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Rewrite the sentence, correcting the errors

Upon discovering that I lied about going to my friends house- my mom grounded me for three weeks- which I thought was excessive.

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Upon discovering that I lied about going to my friend's house, my mom grounded me for three weeks, but I thought that was excessive. 
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Upon discovering that I lied about going to my friend's house, my mom grounded me for three weeks, which I thought was excessive.

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