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Make this sentence understandable: Rather than staying at school working on a packet provided to you by your teacher you have this opportunity to experience the outdoors

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This is what I changed: "Rather than staying at school as you work on a pack provided by your teacher, you have the opportunity to experience the outdoors."
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