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What is the claim to this story?

My brother and I

─shopping for mother—

decided to get the “good food”

over on the other side

Of the tracks.

We dared each other.

Laughed a little.

Thought about it.

Said, what’s the big deal.

Thought about that.

Decided we were men,

not boys.

Decided we should go wherever

we dang wanted to.

Oh, my brother—now he was bad.

Tough dude. Afraid of nothing.

I was afraid of him.

So there we go,

climbing over

the iron and wood ties,

over discarded sofas

and bent-up market carts,

over a weed-and-dirt road,

into a place called South Gate

─all white. All-American.

We entered the forbidden

narrow line of hate,

imposed,

transposed,

supposed,

a line of power/powerlessness

full of meaning,

meaning nothing—

those lines that crisscross
the abdomen of this land,

that strangle you

in your days, in your nights.

When you dream.

There we were, two Mexicans,

six and nine—from Watts, no less.

Oh, this was plenty reason

to hate us.

Plenty reason to run up behind us.

Five teenagers on bikes.

Plenty reason to knock

the groceries out from our arms—

a splattering heap of soup

cans, bread and candy.

Plenty reason to hold me down

on the hot asphalt; melted gum

and chips of broken

beer bottle on my lips and cheek.

Plenty reason to get my brother

by the throat, taking turns

punching him in the face,

cutting his lip,

punching, him vomiting.

Punching until swollen and dark blue

he slid from their grasp

like a rotten banana from its peeling.

When they had enough, they threw us back,

dirty and lacerated,

back to Watts, its towers shiny

across the orange-red sky.

My brother then forced me

to promise not to tell anybody

how he cried.

He forced me to swear to God,

to Jesus Christ, to our long-dead
Indian Grandmother—

keepers of our meddling souls.

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the claim of the story is that the teenagers had many reasons to fight the kids before they got home.

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