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What is the secret to reaching someone with words? help! The poem is Almost ''summer sky.''

User Raghul Raj
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Use emotions and good descriptive words. I wrote this on the fly.

She turned around,

Met my eyes,

And it was magic.

Her eyes sky blue,

The clouds began to part,

The sun illuminating her,

Her warmth is a breeze that hits you.

My heart pounding with words

That I could say,

She turns away.

And so goes my

Almost

Summer sky.



User Eugen Dubrovin
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