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Is this a strong claim? Bullying existed before smartphones and social media sites became popular.

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I think the claim is okay. I'm guessing you're writing about cyber bullying? I think you should include that in your claim..

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I believe that is a strong claim because it introduces what you will be talking about (bullying) and notifies the reader that bullying occurred before smartphones and social media sites becoming popular.
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