Which contains a phrase with wordy material that should be deleted or rephrased?
A)Seymore was convinced that attending the fall conference would be a big
waste of his time
B)It was an added bonus to learn that after the conference we would each
receive two tickets to a Broadway musical
C)The keynote speaker for the conference has been a gifted performer with
the Manhattan Theatre Club for seven years.
D) Mackenzie enjoyed meeting people and learning new things, so shejumped at the chance to get out of the office for a week.