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read the incorrect question. write three to five sentences explaining what kind of run on sentance it is and how to revise it. "My mother and father are both scientists, it must have been my destiny to become interested in biology."

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My mother and father are both scientists, it must have been my destiny to be interested in biology.
My mother and father are both scientists, it must be my destiny to become interested in biology.
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You could revise it by saying "My mother and father are both scientists, so it must have been my destiny to become interested in biology."
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