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Write a short, persuasive paragraph of at least one hundred words with the purpose of convincing your teacher not to assign any homework for the evening. Make sure you state your purpose in the first sentence, support your ideas with at least one sentence that contains parallel structure in the body of your paragraph, and end with a concluding sentence.

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I think that students shouldnt be given homework because school and the classes we have now is already hard enough. Like our brains are already tired enough from having to wake up and get to school extra early and do all these work in several different classes. And I know me personally I rarely have the time or energy to do any homework after school because I work most of the time and even when I don't have to work I always feel tired because on school days I work night shift so I be up working all night then when I get home I am instantly tired. sometimes we just need a break from all the homework. Plus most likely we already have been given a ton of homework from all of our other teachers. Like y'all cant seriously expect us to do all this work. And honestly I don't see the point, like why make us do work in class then punish us by giving us work to do at home as well. Like home is supposed to be when we get a little break from school until the next morning a place to relax. Like its kind of like when I get off work I go home to relax, like most people would, you don't see peoples jobs giving them work that they have to do at home. Like when I go to work I clean and take orders all that, when I get home I dont take peoples orders, so why should I have to learn and do work assignments from school at home. Because the idea is that we work while we are there, but when you clock out and go home that time is yours to just chill. So my point is that homework is not necessary school is for learning while we are here home is where we relax to get away from school.

User Houssem Hichri
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I believe we should not be given any homework today.  Our class works hard and we do a lot of homework.  My parents might be fed up with the lack of time they get to spend with me. Do you really want an angry letter and a bad rating? My parents want me to enjoy life and be a kid.  Also, if we didn't have homework tonight, I could get together and reconnect with friends i have not seen for a long time.  Isn't friendship and joy more important than homework? So, as I hope you can see, homework is not a priority compared to simple joys of life like family and friendships. I hope you will not assign any homework tonight. :)
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