Directions: Rewrite the passages to correct excessive, illogical, or inappropriate
coordination or subordination.
1. Gerald had reservations for a flight that was going to Samar, but first he had to
catch the bus to Bacolod, and since the bus was late, he missed the plane as a
result.
sinc
but first / and
he had
2. When my friend and I went hiking in the mountains so that we might enjoy
ourselves, we wanted to hike fifty miles, but not only did we find the hiking
strenuous but also the weather intimidating.
3. Sanya was happy that Gina had offered to drive her into city, and she was not
too sure whether or not to accept because she had planned to collect flowers
along her walk so that she could bring some to her mother at home so she
declined though she would have enjoyed Gina's company.
4. Our teacher assigned us an additional task until we could have more practice.