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Rewrite the following paragraph using clear sentences, standard English, and proper spelling and grammar.

ATTN Office Staff:

Its come to our attention that someone has been taking xtra supplies out of the supply cabinet for some time now and this is NOT alloud.  The ofc mgr says that if it continues to happen we will have to put up security cameras and this will come out of the office budget, therefore our paychex!  Please make sure that you are only using what is budgeting for your department

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The paragraph with clear sentences, standard English, and proper spelling and grammar is:

It has come to out attention that someone has been taking extra supplies out of the supply cabinet for some time now. This is not allowed. The office manager says that if it continues to happen, we will have to put up security cameras. This will come out of the office budget. Therefore, our paychecks! Please make sure that you are only using what is budgeted for your department.

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Answer:

It has come to out attention that someone has been taking extra supplies out of the supply cabinet for some time now. This is not allowed. The office manager says that if it continues to happen, we will have to put up security cameras. This will come out of the office budget. Therefore, our paychecks! Please make sure that you are only using what is budgeted for your department.

Step-by-step explanation:

xtra - the word is actually extra

NOT - The sentence became an independent sentence and the word is no longer fully capitalized

ofc - was changed into The Office Manager

"...therefore our paychex!" - it was turned into an independent sentence

There was punctuation added as well, like a final period to the text.

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