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How would you change the problem in this sentence.

You should never jog immediately after eating a big meal.

remove the difficult language
remove the slang
change the second person to third

User Techno
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Change the second person to third.
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Answer:

C: change the second person to third

Step-by-step explanation:

To correct this sentence, it is more appropriate to use another pronoun ("one") instead of the pronoun "you". You is more 'friendly', implying that the speaker can imagine himself/herself in such a position, it is common in ordinary conversation. One is more impersonal, and not used so often. "One should never jog immediately after eating a big meal."

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