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What form, figurative language, and poetic devices does my poem have? Let me know if anything needs to be changed

Just be yourself” they said.
Social pressures always with me,
Now I can’t rid these voices in my head.
Voices always telling me to be something I’m not,
“Perhaps who I am is not enough?” I thought,
Layering a thousand pounds of makeup, changing my looks,
“Why am I doing this?” I wondered,
“Why am I changing my appearance at the expense of my dignity and checkbook?”
As days went on I still thought I was right,
Not realizing how blinding my was,
my head still plays that never ending message every night.

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similes, metaphors etc.
User Vahid Kharazi
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That’s actually really good. It has similes, metaphors, and personification. And it’s pretty detailed
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