Question

Which sentence is a formal revision of the informal example sentence? Informal sentence: In my opinion, Hercules is pretty much the best character because he shows more strength and courage than any other mortal man. Everyone knows that Hercules is the strongest and most courageous of the mythical characters. Hercules shows important character traits, such as strength and courage. Sometimes, like in the case of Hercules, it’s really all about how strong and courageous you are. Hercules is the best character because he’s stronger and more courageous than other mortals.

Answer 1

The formal revision of the informal sentence about Heracles is 'Hercules shows important character traits, such as strength and courage,' as it presents a professional tone and excludes colloquial language.

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The sentence that is a formal revision of the informal example sentence "In my opinion, Hercules is pretty much the best character because he shows more strength and courage than any other mortal man" is: Hercules shows important character traits, such as strength and courage. This revision maintains a professional tone and removes colloquial language such as "pretty much" and "because he's stronger and more courageous than other mortals," which is present in the informal version. Instead, the focus is placed on the character traits of Hercules, providing a clear and concise formal statement.

Answer 2

B. Hercules shows important character traits, such as strength and courage.

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