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Rewrite this sentence so that it is less wordy and its meaning is clearer:

By the time he returned home from school, Keenan was beginning to suspect that there was only one way you could possibly come to a solution for his dilemma, and that he can only find that solution by flipping a coin

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By the time Keenan got home, he suspected that the only way he could find a solution to his dilemma was by flipping a coin.

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