Question

Can someone revise this and make corrections to it im giving 30 point

Who does it effect and why does it affect us? It affects us because it is deadly. They are very unsafe creatures and are very fatal to us. So next time you think about touching a jellyfish think twice because you do not want to get hurt or die.

Answer 1

Because *They* are deadly,

comma after jellyfish

hurt, or even die.

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