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Read this example of incorrect sentence structure. Gino is starring in the school play, it opens next week. Which revision best corrects the sentence?​

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Gino is starring in the school play, which opens next week.

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*Possible corrections

1) Gino is starring in the school play that opens next week.

2) Gino is starring in the school play—it opens next week.

3) The school play opens next week and Gino is starring in it.

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