Question

Can you help me fix this paragraph please? I’m not fluent in english and i need someone to fix this for me.

“Barrington Irving flies around the globe and live streams his experiences in order to teach students from K-8 about topics that open the students mind to immense opportunities”

Answer 1

I think it's pretty good but here

Step-by-step explanation:

Barrignton Irving is a live streamer who flies around the world and records his experiences for students from K-8 to open up their minds to new topics and immense opportunities.

Answer 2

Barrington Irving flies around the globe and live streams his experiences, he teaches students from K-8 about topics that open the student’s mind to immense opportunities.