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What is the best way to revise the last sentence?

Read the sentences from a student's essay about "The
Treasure of Lemon Brown."
In this story, Lemon Brown make a great impact on Greg
by showing him the value of the bond between fathers
and sons. Greg then appreciates his own father better,
despite his father's shortcomings.

O replace "Greg then" with "In conclusion, Greg"

O replace "Greg then" with "Therefore, Greg"

O replace "Greg then" with "Consequently, Greg"

O replace "Greg then" with "So, Greg"

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Answer:

C. replace “Greg then” with “Consequently, Greg”

Step-by-step explanation:

In short, anyway have a good day

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Answer:

replace "Greg then" with "Consequently, Greg"

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