Question

HOW DO I CORRECT THIS SENTENCE IT DOSENT LOOK RIGHT TO ME WITH THE PARENTHESES.

“Are you tired of eating lunch surrounded by noisy high school students? We promise that you’ll have the quiet lunch you deserve, because, MUNCHY’S has the solution! No Music No Cellphones No Students Said, Newspaper ad Munchy’s Promise.”

Answer 1

No music, No cellphones

Answer 2

Where is says

No Music No Cellphones No Students

there should be commas in between like

No Music, No Cellphones, No Students

Does that help you?