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Read the sentence. Walt Whitman was an American poet, journalist, and he also wrote essays. Which revision most effectively corrects the faulty parallelism in the sentence?

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If we consider that Parallelism is the use of components in a sentence that are grammatically the same ( or similar in their construction), we can correct the given sentence as it follows:

Walt Whitman was an American poet and journalist ( being POET and JOURNALIST two professions and two nouns. He also wrote essays ( as WRITE is a verb, and it doesn't have the same grammatical structure as POET and JOURNALIST)