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"Everyone has an inalienable human right to life, even those who commit murder, sentencing a person to death and executing them violates that right. Therefore, the death penalty is the ultimate denial of humna rights." Correct that sentence please. Should there be the word "Therefore" or not? (sorry for my bad English) .... Thank You!

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Everyone has the inalienable human right to life, even those who commit murder. Sentencing a person to death and executing them violates their right to life. Therefore, the death penalty is the ultimate denial of human rights.


I fixed all the little mistakes I saw, it sounded good to me :)
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