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Which sentence would be the most engaging opening for a story about a clumsy girl who wants--more than anything--to be a cheerleader? A) The gymnasium was quiet and empty at that particular time of the afternoon. B) Julie was nervous about the entire situation and wasn't sure how to react or what to do. C) This is a story about a clumsy girl who really, really wants to try-out and become a cheerleader. D) Julie stumbled through the door five minutes late--not exactly the best beginning for a cheerleader try-out.

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I think D since it gives a significant sign about how shes "late" and people will assume that she is clumsy and forgetful yet wants to do try outs for cheer

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D) Julie se tropezó con la puerta cinco minutos tarde, no es exactamente el mejor comienzo para una prueba de porristas.

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