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Which sentence is inappropriate and should be deleted from a formal press release?

Which sentence is inappropriate and should be deleted from a formal press release-example-1

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Answer:

C should be deleted.

Step-by-step explanation:

If you look at option C it says "you can buy right packaging stuff..." That is lacking detail and sounds as if it was written by a 8 year old. Because "stuff" needs to be specified. "Stuff" could mean anything from soap bubbles to quarks and DNA. That is why C should be deleted because it is lacking detail.

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