Question

I need help PLEASE.

this is the assignment
1. Describe a goal for interpersonal improvement in your personal life. Be sure to explain the following:

• What aspects of your own interpersonal communication skills would you like to improve?
• How far are you from attaining this goal?
• Do you think this goal is set too high or too low? Why, or why not?
• How long will it take me to attain this goal?
• If the goal will take a long time to attain, could you set smaller goals that you could attain while still working toward your bigger goal?
• How will you benefit from successfully attaining your goal?

This is what I have wrote can someone look and see if this is a good paper or should I do it over.


My goal is to do the very best I can do in my classes so I can pass this course. My goal is very realistic and can be achieved. All I need to do is keep that in my mind and have a little more confidence in myself. I need to improve on when I don’t understand something not to be so afraid of asking for help when I need it. I also need to improve on learning to use the library and the tutoring help that Argosy University has to offer. I feel I still have a lot to learn before I can achieve this goal. Yes, this goal is set a little high for me, because I expect to do good in my courses and I just feel like I am not understanding it very well. I am bad at when I set a goal I have to be the very best at what I do. I put high expectations on myself. I really hope to have my goal achieved by the time I finish this course. I can set smaller goals just by getting my assignments done in time and not rush around and do it all in one day. I need to manage my time a lot better than I have been. The benefits I will attain by the time I finish this course I will be better at communicating and understanding the computer a lot better

Answer 1

Hi, I've corrected it a little bit:

My goal is to do the very best I can do in my classes so I can pass this course. Also is very realistic and can be achieved. All I need to do is keep that in my mind and have a little more confidence in myself. I need to improve on when I don’t understand something not to be so afraid of asking for help when I need it. I also need to improve on learning to use the library and the tutoring help that Argosy University has to offer. I feel like I still have a lot to learn before I can achieve this objective. Yes, this aim is set a little high for me, because I expect to do good in my courses and I just feel like I am not understanding it very well. I am bad at when I set a target I have to be the very best at what I do. I put high expectations on myself. I really hope to have my goal achieved by the time I finish this course. I can set smaller objectives just by getting my assignments done in time and not rush around and do it all in one day. I need to manage my time a lot better than I have been. The benefits I will attain by the time I finish this course I will be better at communicating and understanding the computer a lot better.

You've answered to all the questions, but you've had some little trouble with repeating the word "goal", so I've replaced some of them by using synonyms like: Objective, aim, target. Just for the reader doesn't get tired for reading goal repeated times. Keep working, you're doing great!