Question

Does this sound right?

Hola, me llamo Kayla. Yo quiero comprar un vestido, una camisa y un suéter. En el almuerzo, voy a ir a un restaurante para comprar hamburguesas y patatas fritas, pollo frito y California roll. Todo esto cuesta 9 dólares americanos. Yo pagar con dinero americano. Bueno, eso es todo.

i'm not good at spanish, can someone please help me? thank you :)

Answer 1

Almost perfect
Instead of "hamburguesas y patatas fritas, pollo frito y California roll"
You should write "hamburguesas, patatas fritas, pollo frito y California roll"
If you didn't notice you have to remove the first "y"
And instead of "yo pagar"
You should write "yo pago"
PD: i'm mexican c:

Answer 2

Yes this sounds right I speak Spanish