Question

I’m pretty bad at poetry.. Can anyone review this for me and tell me what I need to add/fix?

Write a poem that contains the following elements
• One of the forms studied (sonic, reverse, lyric, narrative)
• at least one of these poetic devices: first person point of you, rhyme, repetition, or meter
• two or more users a figurative language: metaphor, simile, personification, alliteration, hyperbole, allusion

Answer 1

that looks awsome keep it up

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Answer 2

I write poetry for fun and also for my (old) school, and this is SUPER good!! i don;t see a problem with it, its funny and the stanzas are good. Keep it up!! :))