Question

How should I end this?

To sum up, any types of school have their pros and cons. Private schools own a larger educational arrangement than public schools. Not only do students enjoy the experience of studying and learning, but they are also more secure and taken care of. However, it costs the parents plenty to send their children to private schools and may result in financial sacrifices. In my point of view, private schools can be good, because it gives the students a good education which will give them benefits in the future.

Answer 1

In summary, private schools are good since it gives the students a good education which will in turn give them benefits in the future. Private schools own a larger educational arrangement than public schools. Not only do students enjoy the experience of studying and learning, but they are also more secure and taken care of. However, it costs the parents plenty to send their children to private schools and may result in financial sacrifices. Any types of school have their pros and cons.

I think ^ is a better format (claim going first) and also i say you should stay away from "in my opinion" "I" etc, just state it was a fact like i did above

Answer 2

According to my point of view, even if private schools imply financial sacrifices by the parents, all of them are worthy, because when a children study at a private school get more chances of learning in a proper and adequeate environment, access to an advanced level of subjects, are taught by high qualified teachers, therefore it could be much more beneficial than study in a public school.