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Hey I really think I'd be amazing for this job and totally hope you hire me. Talk to ou soon! What is wrong with this sentence

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Answer: The tone is too casual.

Explanation: The person’s cover letter is too casual, the person makes it sounds like he or she is talking to a friend.

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