Question

This is a draft for a poem I wrote for class but as I’ve been reading over it, it sounds worse and worse every time... Could someone give me their dead honest opinion and maybe some suggestions because I still have to turn it in, haha. Thank you very much.

Answer 1

the tittle is spot on, i like it. but I'd suggest in the 2nd half of the poem to talk about more how we are ruining the earth or major problems we have, or in the 2nd half of the poem write about how you see the world in your eyes since we all have different perspectives.