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Can I have some critique on my poem? Our focus is on concrete detail and rhythm/meter. Thank you so much. The poem doesn't represent my views- its for an ELA assignment on the theme on how discrimination
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Can I have some critique on my poem?

Our focus is on concrete detail and rhythm/meter.
Thank you so much.

The poem doesn't represent my views- its for an ELA assignment on the theme on how discrimination has a bad effect.

Can I have some critique on my poem? Our focus is on concrete detail and rhythm/meter-example-1
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Really well written and definitely gives concrete detail as I can imagine this scene in my mind by just reading it.
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