Question

Read the passage.

We go on a family trip every summer. We usually go to a national park or visit a relative we haven’t seen for awhile. We have a lot of relatives! My favorite trips are to my grandparents’ home in Texas. Last year, we had a big family reunion.
Which strategy should you use to improve the passage?


Increase audience appeal by adding descriptive details.

Clarify the purpose by interviewing those involved.

Narrow the topic by finding the center of gravity.

Broaden the topic by brainstorming ideas.

Answer 1

The first one, Increase audience appeal by adding descriptive details.