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What is the BEST way to combine the information in the two sentences below?

Mercedes threw Andrea a surprise birthday party last night. Andrea is Mercedes' best friend.
A.
Mercedes threw Andrea, Mercedes' best friend, a surprise birthday party last night.
B.
Mercedes threw Andrea a surprise birthday party last night, but Andrea is Mercedes' best friend.
C.
Mercedes threw Andrea a surprise birthday party last night, when Andrea is Mercedes' best friend.
D.
Mercedes threw Andrea a surprise birthday party last night, Andrea is Mercedes' best friend.

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A. Mercedes threw Andrea, Mercedes’ best friend, a surprise birthday party last night would makes there most sense.
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The answer is A. Mercedes threw Andrea, Mercedes' best friend, a surprise party last night. This choice uses an appositive ("Andrea, Mercedes' best friend,") to combine the two sentences. An appositive is a phrase separated from the rest of the sentence by commas that describes something (in this case Andrea).


Choices B and C are incorrect because the uses of the words "but" and "when" to combine the sentences do not make logical sense. Choice D is incorrect because it uses a comma to combine the sentences without a conjunction, creating a run-on sentence.


Hope this helps!

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