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Is this stream of consciousness short essay? pls tell me ur response and thoughts about this

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We all have dreams, right? i always remember my dreams, why? we life down in bed, close our eyes for a few seconds, and wake up hours later, why?

in a room alone. blue sheets and a white pillow. i like dreaming but how does it all happen? thats what confuses me the most. dreaming occurs in the REM stage of sleep.

When we dream, we have once see what we dreamt about at least once in our life. memories emotions, and stimuli play a role in our dreams. we always talk about it and we are always curious about it.

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no because presents your thesis, argument, solution and defends or proves it in 1–2 paragraphs

but this could be considered a poem (a really good one)

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I think this is lovely all and all. I do believe the word ‘why’ is repeated in a odd way. Keep working!
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