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Read the sentence. Ness loves her kitten. Which is the best way to revise this sentence using descriptive detail and sensory words? Please help urgent

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Ness really loves her furry little kitten.

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idk if this is right but you can try "Ness is always happy when she sees her fluffy small kitten, it just beings a huge toothy grin to her face." or "Ness loves touching her soft fluffy kitten and hearing her sweet song-like purring"

idk which one is better, sorry
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