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What sentence sounds better?

1. The sun stone was carved by the Aztecs, and it was probably carved in the late 1400’s, just a few years before Cortes conquered them.
2. The Aztecs carved the sun stone, and they probably carved it in the late 1400’s, just a few years before Cortes conquered them.

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sentence 2 sounds more correct
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I believe that sentence 2 sounds better!


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