Question

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Use the three-point general rubric to evaluate the paragraph.

An Afternoon of Modern Art

On saturday, I went to the Bates County Museum of Art with my parents. We saw the new modern art exhibit, and it was pretty strange. There were one painting that didn’t really look like anything but slattered paint. Another painting was made out of foil and torn paper. There were also lots of crazy statues made out of metal, bottles, and cans. One even made out of bicycle parts. Did I mention that we ate lunch first? Anyway, the exhibit might be interesting for somebody who like modern art.


Three-Point General Rubric


Points Criteria
3 · The writing is clearly focused on the task.
· A main idea is well-developed and supported with relevant details.
· There are almost no errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

2 · The writing is related to the task but generally lacks focus.
· Support for the main idea is not clear or is missing.
· There are a few errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

1 · The writing is not focused on the task.
· There is no clear main idea.
· There are many errors in grammar, spelling and punctuation.


How does this passage meet the first criterion in the rubric?


A)All sentences except the one are focused on the exhibit.


B)The writing is not focused on the art exhibit at all.


C)Only some of the writing is focused on the exhibit.


D)The writing is clearly focused on the modern art exhibit.

Answer 1

the answer is A an Afthernoon of modern art ( Gradpoint )

Answer 2

The correct answer is A, all sentences except one is focused on the exhibit. Thereisonly one sentence: did Imention that we had lunch first? which doesnot focus on the exhibit. In addition to that, there is a noticeablemistake when the speaker uses a plural conjugation with a singular object., which is the case of "...there were one painting...". The second closest option would be D,but it isnot completely true, since is fair to say that A ismore accurate as it includes the mistake made by the speaker.