Question

Does this claim sound good? I'm in a advanced language arts 8th grade by the way and want to know if this meets the standards

"Aaron Miller establishes Eastwood’s theory proclaiming that boredom kicks off in the brain rather than one’s environment and learning to think differently about something that leaves you cold may start a spark of engagement."

Answer 1

It does need a quote to support it and make sure to support the quote to

Answer 2

sound good to me, but i would make sure that you use a quote to back this up