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Keep the following in mind as you prepare yourself by answering the following questions to write two paragraphs in which you utilize a change of focus between each paragraph.
What is the main idea of your first paragraph?
What is the main idea of your second paragraph?
Which of the eight types of focus (time, place, action, mood, point of view, speaker, idea, or step) will you use to change the focus of the second paragraph?


YOUR TASK:
Write two paragraphs that use a change of focus.
(It can be any topic you choose!)

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The first time I drove a car was an amzing experience. Feeling the movement of a vehicle under your command was an astonishing experience, the sound of the engine increasing or decreasing only with a light gentle movement of my foot, and the movement trhough the window, of which I was now in absolute control.

The sky looks so quiet, so peaceful that it looks like it never ends,like nothing passes by or like the time has stopped. Lookin through the window, at 35.000 feet, at about 500 milesanhour is an incredibly calm and satisfying experience, uphere, we are so far from the world weknow that it makesme wonderif we ever should go back again.

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